Chapter 35: 35
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However, it is not just the two parties who are curious about who is big and who is small, and netizens are even more interested.
When "All Star Challenge" was officially aired, although Qiu Jin Dadong's section was cut off, but the video has been secretly circulated.
——Qiu Jin, are you the biggest boom in the entertainment industry?
——Of course not, where can I be big? That's what you haven't seen Ji Zong.
As soon as this remark came out, netizens were very curious.
Even Qiu Jin, who prides himself on being the biggest in the entertainment industry, is ashamed of himself. How scary is Ji Shenxiao's gadget?
At least 20 cm up? It is estimated that the result is more objective. The diameter should be five or six centimeters, right? No matter how long Omega is, he can't get out of bed.
Hey~!
Then netizens made a top 10 list in the entertainment industry.
Ji Shenxiao undoubtedly ranked first in the throne, and the picture is the phase of their beach. The gif of Ji Shenxiao's big dong is circulating on the Internet.
Qiu Jin second, the picture is the one he couldn't paste in "All Star Challenge".
Wen Mojia is the third, and the picture is the figure of the crotch of his heroine in the play.
...
There are many people who are not happy, but more people watch the drama.
[What the hell? This tm can also be popular? What does wb recommend to me every day? ]
[Don’t you bother, is there any comparison! It's too lousy to talk about the x-organs of male stars]
[It’s nothing like yours, I don’t know what you are sour. Anyway, I’m so superficial, sheep are beautiful, and nature is beautiful]
[Secondary, even when there is no response, it is cute. It’s soft, big, and two little peach, lovable, much more cute than lipstick men]
[I only have 15cm, sorry, I don’t deserve to be A. ]
[Brother upstairs, 15 I can! Read my private message! ]
...
Ji Shenxiao didn't know that he had started to spread his various YY online, of course, no one had the courage to dare to presume this in front of him.
So the years are quiet.
Qiu Jin has long been accustomed to all kinds of gossip and buzzwords, and now he has learned to ignore and respond.
The most incredible is Wen Mojia.
He has always taken the lead of an overbearing president, and from time to time, fans have posted pictures of his A burst.
Domineering president, of course, sexual ability is a very important aspect, but now he is ranked third? Even if Ji Shenxiao crushed him, even Qiu Jin was in front of him?
The assistant saw that he had a bad complexion and quickly comforted: "I heard that Qiu Jin would stuff socks inside, or will you try it next time?"
Wen Mojia: "Go!"
As the assistant rolled, he also gave his boss a breeze: "Really, a hypocritical person like Qiu Jin, how could it be so big? It must have been a fake, maybe three socks were stuffed!"
Wen Mojia looked at the mirror: "Really?"
As soon as he said this, he thought it was boring. It was too superficial, and netizens would be irresponsible for a moment. What is he really serious about?
Forget it, or recite the script! This time he finally received a play with a special sense of the script and the characters, but he couldn't drop it in his hands.
Qiu Jin is also reading the script, and there is a script reading "The Rise and Fall of the World" this Saturday.
The day before yesterday, Yang Chi specially called to remind him, and also told him: "We do not expect to rely on acting skills to suppress the crowd, don't be late."
Qiu Jin: "..."
He wanted to tell the agent that you knew nothing about my strength, but listening to the other person's cautious tone, he still swallowed this sentence into his stomach.
Yang Chi is not easy, this is probably the humblest broker.
The next day Qiu Jin arrived half an hour earlier, and met a tall, thin young man with sunglasses at the door, with a tall nose and a cool white chin.
The other party's eyes casually swept across the hall and suddenly stopped when he saw him.
Still in such a big battle, Qiu Jin smiled and nodded at him, saying hello.
As if he didn't expect him to take the initiative, Xiang Xi froze for a moment, withdrawing his gaze stiffly, and hurried into the elevator.
The scripts were read at the round table conference room on the second floor of Huayi Media. They came too early. After Qiu Jin watched the two plays, people were almost there.
There was no table sign on the spot, everyone sat casually, Xiang Xi was diagonally opposite him, Jiang Ming was next to Xiang Xi directly opposite him.
At this moment, Qiu Jin suddenly heard a fragrant floral fragrance around him. He raised his head and an actress with big wavy hair came over with a super black sunglasses on his face.
"No one here?"
The woman asked him, this voice is very distinctive, low but not dumb, don't have a flavor, and the recognition is extremely high.
"Teacher Zhang?" Qiu Jin recognized the person immediately and moved to the side. "No one, just sit casually."
The woman sat down, took off her sunglasses and placed it on the table, revealing a bright and gorgeous face.
This is another main supporting character, Zhang Qiongzi, who plays the queen Zhiluo, a vulgar and incompetent husband in the harem, and finally kills her husband to become king, becoming the first queen in the history of "The Rise and Fall of the World".
People are coming together, and the siege will officially start.
The actors put forward their understanding of the role in turn, and they can also put forward questions about the script or want to change it.
When it was Qiu Jin’s turn, he didn’t say anything. He said directly: “Both screenwriters are very professional. I have questions about a play and hope to delete some lines.”
The young screenwriter Guan Yuquan frowned subconsciously, because he wrote the scene and spent a lot of pen and ink.
"The Rise and Fall of the World" has two screenwriters, an old screenwriter, who is good at telling stories and digging deeper connotations, and a young screenwriter, who is good at creating ideas and spreading his blood.
Similar to filming, the small fresh meat carries flow, and the old drama supports the quality of the bones.
Guan Yuquan is a kind of newcomer screenwriter with traffic. In the past few years, he burst two youth movie scripts and began to join the screenwriter industry.
Of course, this is not to say that he is incapable. He is also capable of fire.
But he has three problems.
The first is to love dog blood, to turn too much and ignore logic.
The second is to use adjectives and adverbs rather than verbs.
The third is to love preaching and reasoning through the mouth of the character.
Qiu Jin pointed out a line of preaching.
It was in the later part of the plot, when humans were fighting zombies, Ji He gave his life in order to create opportunities for the protagonist group.
This is his highlight moment, and the final conclusion.
Of course it should be taken seriously.
So the screenwriter arranged for him a large line of words about his homeland and the world, and also let him recall the past in a solid way, which was completely dead.
Guan Yuquan thought the same way. He heard Qiu Jin's question, and his face changed: "I don't know what teacher Qiu thinks is wrong?"
At this point, everyone's eyes were cast.
In their eyes, Qiu Jin was just a harlequin star without any acting experience. Looking at his previous idol drama, he said that his bad acting skills are all merciful, which is completely unbearable.
Such a person, even want to change the script? Who knows if it's a whim? Maybe you want to show your importance?
Hey, this is the case in the performing arts industry, everyone thinks they can get involved.
Many actors cast empathy on Guan Yuquan.
"There are three specific points," Qiu Jin looked at the people present and said slowly, "First, this line does not match the Ji He's character set. He is a man who kills his father and brother and even gives the country his hand. Before his death, But the hearts of the people of Li Min in the world will split the character and force whitewashing, which is not true."
A layman who doesn’t understand anything. It’s just a joke to think about it at this level. They are so good as screenwriters?
Guan Yuquan suddenly smiled: "Does Teacher Qiu really understand the characters?"
Although he was laughing, everyone could see the contempt and aggressiveness in his laughter.
"Ji He is a complicated person, but also very simple," Qiu Jin ignored his provocation and explained, "The audience can make multiple interpretations of his behavior. But for himself, there is a logic that runs through him 'S life-there is a clear distinction between grievance and retribution."
"Father wants to kill him, so he kills his father; zombies kill people, so he destroys zombies. He is just doing what he thinks is right, not his starting point."
As soon as these words came out, the smile on Guan Yuquan's face disappeared.
Director Yi Congqing's index finger tapped on the table, revealing a thoughtful expression.
Qiu Jin continued: "The second point is that the lines are too preaching. I know that line is very philosophical and meaningful, but why do you want to let the character violate his character image, rather than let the audience realize it? "
At this time, Yi Congqing's tapping on the table stopped.
Guan Yuquan was stunned. He stared at Qiu Jin's expression, but found that he couldn't say anything refuting.
Another old screenwriter Dou Gao nodded: "It is indeed so, instead of preaching ideas, but expressing them and letting the audience discover themselves."
Guan Yuquan opened his mouth: "How can you be sure that the audience can see it?"
Qiu Jin: "There will always be some people who can see it."
"But what if they got it wrong?"
"What does it matter if you misunderstand?" Dou Gao suddenly laughed. "As the so-called'a thousand readers, there are a thousand Hamlet', the work will always be misread, but it is also a different interpretation of people. , Giving the work a new life."
"Delete it." Yi Congqing has been persuaded.
Guan Yuquan nodded. At this time, he looked at Qiu Jin's eyes without any contempt.
He even took the initiative to ask: "What is the third point?"
Qiu Jin: "I think the handling of this scene is too sensational, and I suggest deleting the memories of the walking lanterns, as well as the scenes where the protagonists cry because of Ji He's death."
Yi Congqing disagreed: "The end of Ji He's role must have a highlight moment."
Qiu Jin: "High light is indispensable, but when he made this action, it already showed the meaning behind it. At this time, inserting memories is superfluous."
Yi Congqing twisted his eyebrows, tapping his index finger gently on the table, and finally was persuaded and nodded: "Then delete the memories."
Immediately afterwards, he smiled and asked, "Is there any?"
Qiu Jin hesitated for a moment, and felt that he had talked a little too much. It might make some people unhappy, but he was really unhappy.
The script is the most fundamental thing in a play. It is as uncomfortable to ask him not to see the problem as if it is tickling him.
As if seeing his hesitation, Yi Congqing smiled: "You don't say it now, and we will all be uncomfortable with the film afterwards."
Qiu Jin: "I just think that it's also untimely to arrange the protagonist to cry here."
Yi Congqing: "How to say?"
Qiu Jin: "The situation was critical. They didn't have time to cry. What they should do is to cherish the minutes and seconds that Ji He used his life to win for them."
"You have a certain reason to say so, but..." Yi Congqing frowned. "After the scene just now, the protagonist's feelings inevitably need a catharsis point. The emotions they cried for this action are indispensable. "
Qiu Jin: "In this case, will the follow-up arrangement recall the plot be better?"
Yi Congqing froze for a moment, then immediately patted his thigh, and sighed: "This change is absolute!!"
Holding back tears is more touching than howling.
Heartbroken but still taking responsibility is more heartbreaking than hysterical.
However, people are not always strong. After saving the world, in addition to holding a banquet to celebrate, the warriors will also think of their sacrificed partners.
She burst into tears.
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However, it is not just the two parties who are curious about who is big and who is small, and netizens are even more interested.
When "All Star Challenge" was officially aired, although Qiu Jin Dadong's section was cut off, but the video has been secretly circulated.
——Qiu Jin, are you the biggest boom in the entertainment industry?
——Of course not, where can I be big? That's what you haven't seen Ji Zong.
As soon as this remark came out, netizens were very curious.
Even Qiu Jin, who prides himself on being the biggest in the entertainment industry, is ashamed of himself. How scary is Ji Shenxiao's gadget?
At least 20 cm up? It is estimated that the result is more objective. The diameter should be five or six centimeters, right? No matter how long Omega is, he can't get out of bed.
Hey~!
Then netizens made a top 10 list in the entertainment industry.
Ji Shenxiao undoubtedly ranked first in the throne, and the picture is the phase of their beach. The gif of Ji Shenxiao's big dong is circulating on the Internet.
Qiu Jin second, the picture is the one he couldn't paste in "All Star Challenge".
Wen Mojia is the third, and the picture is the figure of the crotch of his heroine in the play.
...
There are many people who are not happy, but more people watch the drama.
[What the hell? This tm can also be popular? What does wb recommend to me every day? ]
[Don’t you bother, is there any comparison! It's too lousy to talk about the x-organs of male stars]
[It’s nothing like yours, I don’t know what you are sour. Anyway, I’m so superficial, sheep are beautiful, and nature is beautiful]
[Secondary, even when there is no response, it is cute. It’s soft, big, and two little peach, lovable, much more cute than lipstick men]
[I only have 15cm, sorry, I don’t deserve to be A. ]
[Brother upstairs, 15 I can! Read my private message! ]
...
Ji Shenxiao didn't know that he had started to spread his various YY online, of course, no one had the courage to dare to presume this in front of him.
So the years are quiet.
Qiu Jin has long been accustomed to all kinds of gossip and buzzwords, and now he has learned to ignore and respond.
The most incredible is Wen Mojia.
He has always taken the lead of an overbearing president, and from time to time, fans have posted pictures of his A burst.
Domineering president, of course, sexual ability is a very important aspect, but now he is ranked third? Even if Ji Shenxiao crushed him, even Qiu Jin was in front of him?
The assistant saw that he had a bad complexion and quickly comforted: "I heard that Qiu Jin would stuff socks inside, or will you try it next time?"
Wen Mojia: "Go!"
As the assistant rolled, he also gave his boss a breeze: "Really, a hypocritical person like Qiu Jin, how could it be so big? It must have been a fake, maybe three socks were stuffed!"
Wen Mojia looked at the mirror: "Really?"
As soon as he said this, he thought it was boring. It was too superficial, and netizens would be irresponsible for a moment. What is he really serious about?
Forget it, or recite the script! This time he finally received a play with a special sense of the script and the characters, but he couldn't drop it in his hands.
Qiu Jin is also reading the script, and there is a script reading "The Rise and Fall of the World" this Saturday.
The day before yesterday, Yang Chi specially called to remind him, and also told him: "We do not expect to rely on acting skills to suppress the crowd, don't be late."
Qiu Jin: "..."
He wanted to tell the agent that you knew nothing about my strength, but listening to the other person's cautious tone, he still swallowed this sentence into his stomach.
Yang Chi is not easy, this is probably the humblest broker.
The next day Qiu Jin arrived half an hour earlier, and met a tall, thin young man with sunglasses at the door, with a tall nose and a cool white chin.
The other party's eyes casually swept across the hall and suddenly stopped when he saw him.
Still in such a big battle, Qiu Jin smiled and nodded at him, saying hello.
As if he didn't expect him to take the initiative, Xiang Xi froze for a moment, withdrawing his gaze stiffly, and hurried into the elevator.
The scripts were read at the round table conference room on the second floor of Huayi Media. They came too early. After Qiu Jin watched the two plays, people were almost there.
There was no table sign on the spot, everyone sat casually, Xiang Xi was diagonally opposite him, Jiang Ming was next to Xiang Xi directly opposite him.
At this moment, Qiu Jin suddenly heard a fragrant floral fragrance around him. He raised his head and an actress with big wavy hair came over with a super black sunglasses on his face.
"No one here?"
The woman asked him, this voice is very distinctive, low but not dumb, don't have a flavor, and the recognition is extremely high.
"Teacher Zhang?" Qiu Jin recognized the person immediately and moved to the side. "No one, just sit casually."
The woman sat down, took off her sunglasses and placed it on the table, revealing a bright and gorgeous face.
This is another main supporting character, Zhang Qiongzi, who plays the queen Zhiluo, a vulgar and incompetent husband in the harem, and finally kills her husband to become king, becoming the first queen in the history of "The Rise and Fall of the World".
People are coming together, and the siege will officially start.
The actors put forward their understanding of the role in turn, and they can also put forward questions about the script or want to change it.
When it was Qiu Jin’s turn, he didn’t say anything. He said directly: “Both screenwriters are very professional. I have questions about a play and hope to delete some lines.”
The young screenwriter Guan Yuquan frowned subconsciously, because he wrote the scene and spent a lot of pen and ink.
"The Rise and Fall of the World" has two screenwriters, an old screenwriter, who is good at telling stories and digging deeper connotations, and a young screenwriter, who is good at creating ideas and spreading his blood.
Similar to filming, the small fresh meat carries flow, and the old drama supports the quality of the bones.
Guan Yuquan is a kind of newcomer screenwriter with traffic. In the past few years, he burst two youth movie scripts and began to join the screenwriter industry.
Of course, this is not to say that he is incapable. He is also capable of fire.
But he has three problems.
The first is to love dog blood, to turn too much and ignore logic.
The second is to use adjectives and adverbs rather than verbs.
The third is to love preaching and reasoning through the mouth of the character.
Qiu Jin pointed out a line of preaching.
It was in the later part of the plot, when humans were fighting zombies, Ji He gave his life in order to create opportunities for the protagonist group.
This is his highlight moment, and the final conclusion.
Of course it should be taken seriously.
So the screenwriter arranged for him a large line of words about his homeland and the world, and also let him recall the past in a solid way, which was completely dead.
Guan Yuquan thought the same way. He heard Qiu Jin's question, and his face changed: "I don't know what teacher Qiu thinks is wrong?"
At this point, everyone's eyes were cast.
In their eyes, Qiu Jin was just a harlequin star without any acting experience. Looking at his previous idol drama, he said that his bad acting skills are all merciful, which is completely unbearable.
Such a person, even want to change the script? Who knows if it's a whim? Maybe you want to show your importance?
Hey, this is the case in the performing arts industry, everyone thinks they can get involved.
Many actors cast empathy on Guan Yuquan.
"There are three specific points," Qiu Jin looked at the people present and said slowly, "First, this line does not match the Ji He's character set. He is a man who kills his father and brother and even gives the country his hand. Before his death, But the hearts of the people of Li Min in the world will split the character and force whitewashing, which is not true."
A layman who doesn’t understand anything. It’s just a joke to think about it at this level. They are so good as screenwriters?
Guan Yuquan suddenly smiled: "Does Teacher Qiu really understand the characters?"
Although he was laughing, everyone could see the contempt and aggressiveness in his laughter.
"Ji He is a complicated person, but also very simple," Qiu Jin ignored his provocation and explained, "The audience can make multiple interpretations of his behavior. But for himself, there is a logic that runs through him 'S life-there is a clear distinction between grievance and retribution."
"Father wants to kill him, so he kills his father; zombies kill people, so he destroys zombies. He is just doing what he thinks is right, not his starting point."
As soon as these words came out, the smile on Guan Yuquan's face disappeared.
Director Yi Congqing's index finger tapped on the table, revealing a thoughtful expression.
Qiu Jin continued: "The second point is that the lines are too preaching. I know that line is very philosophical and meaningful, but why do you want to let the character violate his character image, rather than let the audience realize it? "
At this time, Yi Congqing's tapping on the table stopped.
Guan Yuquan was stunned. He stared at Qiu Jin's expression, but found that he couldn't say anything refuting.
Another old screenwriter Dou Gao nodded: "It is indeed so, instead of preaching ideas, but expressing them and letting the audience discover themselves."
Guan Yuquan opened his mouth: "How can you be sure that the audience can see it?"
Qiu Jin: "There will always be some people who can see it."
"But what if they got it wrong?"
"What does it matter if you misunderstand?" Dou Gao suddenly laughed. "As the so-called'a thousand readers, there are a thousand Hamlet', the work will always be misread, but it is also a different interpretation of people. , Giving the work a new life."
"Delete it." Yi Congqing has been persuaded.
Guan Yuquan nodded. At this time, he looked at Qiu Jin's eyes without any contempt.
He even took the initiative to ask: "What is the third point?"
Qiu Jin: "I think the handling of this scene is too sensational, and I suggest deleting the memories of the walking lanterns, as well as the scenes where the protagonists cry because of Ji He's death."
Yi Congqing disagreed: "The end of Ji He's role must have a highlight moment."
Qiu Jin: "High light is indispensable, but when he made this action, it already showed the meaning behind it. At this time, inserting memories is superfluous."
Yi Congqing twisted his eyebrows, tapping his index finger gently on the table, and finally was persuaded and nodded: "Then delete the memories."
Immediately afterwards, he smiled and asked, "Is there any?"
Qiu Jin hesitated for a moment, and felt that he had talked a little too much. It might make some people unhappy, but he was really unhappy.
The script is the most fundamental thing in a play. It is as uncomfortable to ask him not to see the problem as if it is tickling him.
As if seeing his hesitation, Yi Congqing smiled: "You don't say it now, and we will all be uncomfortable with the film afterwards."
Qiu Jin: "I just think that it's also untimely to arrange the protagonist to cry here."
Yi Congqing: "How to say?"
Qiu Jin: "The situation was critical. They didn't have time to cry. What they should do is to cherish the minutes and seconds that Ji He used his life to win for them."
"You have a certain reason to say so, but..." Yi Congqing frowned. "After the scene just now, the protagonist's feelings inevitably need a catharsis point. The emotions they cried for this action are indispensable. "
Qiu Jin: "In this case, will the follow-up arrangement recall the plot be better?"
Yi Congqing froze for a moment, then immediately patted his thigh, and sighed: "This change is absolute!!"
Holding back tears is more touching than howling.
Heartbroken but still taking responsibility is more heartbreaking than hysterical.
However, people are not always strong. After saving the world, in addition to holding a banquet to celebrate, the warriors will also think of their sacrificed partners.
She burst into tears.
However, it is not just the two parties who are curious about who is big and who is small, and netizens are even more interested.When "All Star Challenge" was officially aired, although Qiu Jin Dadong's section was cut off, but the video has been secretly circulated.Qiu Jin, are you the biggest boom in the entertainment industry?Of course not, where can I be big? That's what you haven't seen Ji Zong.As soon as this remark came out, netizens were very curious.Even Qiu Jin, who prides himself on being the biggest in the entertainment industry, is ashamed of himself. How scary is Ji Shenxiao's gadget?At least 20 cm up? It is estimated that the result is more objective. The diameter should be five or six centimeters, right? No matter how long Omega is, he can't get out of bed.Hey~!Then netizens made a top 10 list in the entertainment industry.Ji Shenxiao undoubtedly ranked first in the throne, and the picture is the phase of their beach. The gif of Ji Shenxiao's big dong is circulating on the Internet.Qiu Jin second, the picture is the one he couldn't paste in "All Star Challenge".Wen Mojia is the third, and the picture is the figure of the crotch of his heroine in the play....There are many people who are not happy, but more people watch the drama.What the hell? This tm can also be popular? What does wb recommend to me every day? Don't you bother, is there any comparison! It's too lousy to talk about the x-organs of male starsIt's nothing like yours, I don't know what you are sour. Anyway, I'm so superficial, sheep are beautiful, and nature is beautifulSecondary, even when there is no response, it is cute. It's soft, big, and two little peach, lovable, much more cute than lipstick menI only have 15cm, sorry, I don't deserve to be A. Brother upstairs, 15 I can! Read my private message! ...Ji Shenxiao didn't know that he had started to spread his various YY online, of course, no one had the courage to dare to presume this in front of him.So the years are quiet.Qiu Jin has long been accustomed to all kinds of gossip and buzzwords, and now he has learned to ignore and respond.The most incredible is Wen Mojia.He has always taken the lead of an overbearing president, and from time to time, fans have posted pictures of his A burst.Domineering president, of course, sexual ability is a very important aspect, but now he is ranked third? Even if Ji Shenxiao crushed him, even Qiu Jin was in front of him?The assistant saw that he had a bad complexion and quickly comforted: "I heard that Qiu Jin would stuff socks inside, or will you try it next time?"Wen Mojia: "Go!"As the assistant rolled, he also gave his boss a breeze: "Really, a hypocritical person like Qiu Jin, how could it be so big? It must have been a fake, maybe three socks were stuffed!"Wen Mojia looked at the mirror: "Really?"As soon as he said this, he thought it was boring. It was too superficial, and netizens would be irresponsible for a moment. What is he really serious about?Forget it, or recite the script! This time he finally received a play with a special sense of the script and the characters, but he couldn't drop it in his hands.Qiu Jin is also reading the script, and there is a script reading "The Rise and Fall of the World" this Saturday.The day before yesterday, Yang Chi specially called to remind him, and also told him: "We do not expect to rely on acting skills to suppress the crowd, don't be late."Qiu Jin: "..."He wanted to tell the agent that you knew nothing about my strength, but listening to the other person's cautious tone, he still swallowed this sentence into his stomach.Yang Chi is not easy, this is probably the humblest broker.The next day Qiu Jin arrived half an hour earlier, and met a tall, thin young man with sunglasses at the door, with a tall nose and a cool white chin.The other party's eyes casually swept across the hall and suddenly stopped when he saw him.Still in such a big battle, Qiu Jin smiled and nodded at him, saying hello.As if he didn't expect him to take the initiative, Xiang Xi froze for a moment, withdrawing his gaze stiffly, and hurried into the elevator.The scripts were read at the round table conference room on the second floor of Huayi Media. They came too early. After Qiu Jin watched the two plays, people were almost there.There was no table sign on the spot, everyone sat casually, Xiang Xi was diagonally opposite him, Jiang Ming was next to Xiang Xi directly opposite him.At this moment, Qiu Jin suddenly heard a fragrant floral fragrance around him. He raised his head and an actress with big wavy hair came over with a super black sunglasses on his face."No one here?"The woman asked him, this voice is very distinctive, low but not dumb, don't have a flavor, and the recognition is extremely high."Teacher Zhang?" Qiu Jin recognized the person immediately and moved to the side. "No one, just sit casually."The woman sat down, took off her sunglasses and placed it on the table, revealing a bright and gorgeous face.This is another main supporting character, Zhang Qiongzi, who plays the queen Zhiluo, a vulgar and incompetent husband in the harem, and finally kills her husband to become king, becoming the first queen in the history of "The Rise and Fall of the World".People are coming together, and the siege will officially start.The actors put forward their understanding of the role in turn, and they can also put forward questions about the script or want to change it.When it was Qiu Jin's turn, he didn't say anything. He said directly: Both screenwriters are very professional. I have questions about a play and hope to delete some lines.The young screenwriter Guan Yuquan frowned subconsciously, because he wrote the scene and spent a lot of pen and ink."The Rise and Fall of the World" has two screenwriters, an old screenwriter, who is good at telling stories and digging deeper connotations, and a young screenwriter, who is good at creating ideas and spreading his blood.Similar to filming, the small fresh meat carries flow, and the old drama supports the quality of the bones.Guan Yuquan is a kind of newcomer screenwriter with traffic. In the past few years, he burst two youth movie scripts and began to join the screenwriter industry.Of course, this is not to say that he is incapable. He is also capable of fire.But he has three problems.The first is to love dog blood, to turn too much and ignore logic.The second is to use adjectives and adverbs rather than verbs.The third is to love preaching and reasoning through the mouth of the character.Qiu Jin pointed out a line of preaching.It was in the later part of the plot, when humans were fighting zombies, Ji He gave his life in order to create opportunities for the protagonist group.This is his highlight moment, and the final conclusion.Of course it should be taken seriously.So the screenwriter arranged for him a large line of words about his homeland and the world, and also let him recall the past in a solid way, which was completely dead.Guan Yuquan thought the same way. He heard Qiu Jin's question, and his face changed: "I don't know what teacher Qiu thinks is wrong?"At this point, everyone's eyes were cast.In their eyes, Qiu Jin was just a harlequin star without any acting experience. Looking at his previous idol drama, he said that his bad acting skills are all merciful, which is completely unbearable.Such a person, even want to change the script? Who knows if it's a whim? Maybe you want to show your importance?Hey, this is the case in the performing arts industry, everyone thinks they can get involved.Many actors cast empathy on Guan Yuquan."There are three specific points," Qiu Jin looked at the people present and said slowly, "First, this line does not match the Ji He's character set. He is a man who kills his father and brother and even gives the country his hand. Before his death, But the hearts of the people of Li Min in the world will split the character and force whitewashing, which is not true."A layman who doesn't understand anything. It's just a joke to think about it at this level. They are so good as screenwriters?Guan Yuquan suddenly smiled: "Does Teacher Qiu really understand the characters?"Although he was laughing, everyone could see the contempt and aggressiveness in his laughter."Ji He is a complicated person, but also very simple," Qiu Jin ignored his provocation and explained, "The audience can make multiple interpretations of his behavior. But for himself, there is a logic that runs through him 'S life-there is a clear distinction between grievance and retribution.""Father wants to kill him, so he kills his father; zombies kill people, so he destroys zombies. He is just doing what he thinks is right, not his starting point."As soon as these words came out, the smile on Guan Yuquan's face disappeared.Director Yi Congqing's index finger tapped on the table, revealing a thoughtful expression.Qiu Jin continued: "The second point is that the lines are too preaching. I know that line is very philosophical and meaningful, but why do you want to let the character violate his character image, rather than let the audience realize it? "At this time, Yi Congqing's tapping on the table stopped.Guan Yuquan was stunned. He stared at Qiu Jin's expression, but found that he couldn't say anything refuting.Another old screenwriter Dou Gao nodded: "It is indeed so, instead of preaching ideas, but expressing them and letting the audience discover themselves."Guan Yuquan opened his mouth: "How can you be sure that the audience can see it?"Qiu Jin: "There will always be some people who can see it.""But what if they got it wrong?""What does it matter if you misunderstand?" Dou Gao suddenly laughed. "As the so-called'a thousand readers, there are a thousand Hamlet', the work will always be misread, but it is also a different interpretation of people. , Giving the work a new life.""Delete it." Yi Congqing has been persuaded.Guan Yuquan nodded. At this time, he looked at Qiu Jin's eyes without any contempt.He even took the initiative to ask: "What is the third point?"Qiu Jin: "I think the handling of this scene is too sensational, and I suggest deleting the memories of the walking lanterns, as well as the scenes where the protagonists cry because of Ji He's death."Yi Congqing disagreed: "The end of Ji He's role must have a highlight moment."Qiu Jin: "High light is indispensable, but when he made this action, it already showed the meaning behind it. At this time, inserting memories is superfluous."Yi Congqing twisted his eyebrows, tapping his index finger gently on the table, and finally was persuaded and nodded: "Then delete the memories."Immediately afterwards, he smiled and asked, "Is there any?"Qiu Jin hesitated for a moment, and felt that he had talked a little too much. It might make some people unhappy, but he was really unhappy.The script is the most fundamental thing in a play. It is as uncomfortable to ask him not to see the problem as if it is tickling him.As if seeing his hesitation, Yi Congqing smiled: "You don't say it now, and we will all be uncomfortable with the film afterwards."Qiu Jin: "I just think that it's also untimely to arrange the protagonist to cry here."Yi Congqing: "How to say?"Qiu Jin: "The situation was critical. They didn't have time to cry. What they should do is to cherish the minutes and seconds that Ji He used his life to win for them.""You have a certain reason to say so, but..." Yi Congqing frowned. "After the scene just now, the protagonist's feelings inevitably need a catharsis point. The emotions they cried for this action are indispensable. "Qiu Jin: "In this case, will the follow-up arrangement recall the plot be better?"Yi Congqing froze for a moment, then immediately patted his thigh, and sighed: "This change is absolute!!"Holding back tears is more touching than howling.Heartbroken but still taking responsibility is more heartbreaking than hysterical.However, people are not always strong. After saving the world, in addition to holding a banquet to celebrate, the warriors will also think of their sacrificed partners.She burst into tears.
